The power had been out since midnight, and in the dark, the apartment block exhaled with the slow, wheezing breath of an old lung. Somewhere, a faucet dripped. A generator coughed into life, then died, like it too had given up. From the crack beneath my door leaked a feeble dim orange — not the romantic glow of a candle, no; but the jaundiced glow of a Chinese bulb running off a stolen current.

I peeled myself off the mattress, shirt damp with sleep, and posted myself at the window. The air hadn’t smelled of rain yet, but tasted only like dust and something older, like rust and ghost breath. Down below, a figure crept up the stairs, plastic bag dangling from one hand. His footsteps were deliberate, far too quiet for a place like ours.

Atlas. That’s what the landlady called him. Though I had never heard him speak his name. Atlas Akinwale, apartment 4C. Nobody knew where he came from or what exactly he did, but the tenants called him “the one who brings light” — every time he returned, the hallway bulb worked. It was always the same: he arrived after sundown, vanished before dawn, left no trace in the common spaces, and never answered his door. I once passed him on the stairs and nodded a polite “Evening.” He paused, like the word had startled him, then said, “You’re new here. You dream loud.” Then he walked past my shadows.

I moved in three weeks ago after my divorce and my departure from The Chronicle. The publisher said I had become “too opinionated for politics, too tired for prose.” I told him he had the heart of a lettuce and the imagination of a filing cabinet. He laughed like I’d paid him a compliment and cut my column two hours later. The apartment block — Chawama Heights, as if irony had built it — was all I could afford. Cracked windows. Peeling paint. The occasional rat bold enough to inspect your shoelaces. But rent was cheap, and the landlady, Auntie Mervis, only raised eyebrows, never questions.

I hadn’t intended to write again, not really. But from the first night I saw Atlas, notebook in hand, the words returned like a fever. The first time I tried to follow him, I lost him within two streets. I swear the man turned a corner and vanished into concrete. I came back jittering, mud on my shoes, heart pounding as if someone had chased me into my own skin. I sat by the window for hours, watching the streetlights buzz and blink as if unsure of their own purpose. Atlas didn’t come back until nearly three in the morning, and even then, it was like he materialized from the fog. He was carrying a loaf of bread, a bag of tomatoes, and a bottle of Castle Lager. The guard at the gate gave his usual nod, like Atlas was nothing more than another tenant. I wondered then if I was the only one who saw him clearly.

The next day, I asked Auntie Mervis about him while pretending to pay rent on time.
“Eh, Atlas?” she said, flipping through her green exercise book. “He’s quiet. Pays three months in advance. Never complains about the water. Keeps to himself. You know the type. City man. Maybe Nairobi or Kitwe.”
“Does he work?”
She paused, then smirked, “That’s a dangerous question. Around here, most people do things that don’t translate into job titles. What about you, journalist? Still working for the papers?”
I shook my head and said, “Freelance now.”
She chuckled, “That’s a modern word for ‘unemployed.’ Don’t worry. This place is full of stories. You won’t need to invent anything.”

She was right. The second week, I started collecting details. Atlas never used the communal sink. He washed his hands in a red basin outside his door. He wore the same navy jacket every night, except Thursdays — on Thursdays, he wore a grey hoodie, and always left with a folded paper tucked under his arm. He never greeted children. But he nodded at every old woman who walked past him — just once, not out of politeness, but duty. And every Friday, a woman in a red wrapper left a small bundle outside his door. Always wrapped in banana leaves. Always gone by sunrise.
I made a list. A real one. In my notebook.

  • Brings tomatoes, bread, lightbulbs
  • Talks to no one (except that one time)
  • Knows my name? (Or just guessed?)
  • Keeps bananas but doesn’t eat them
  • Possibly Nairobi
  • Has no reflection (verify — just joking?)

At some point, the game stopped being about the article. I wasn’t going to write about Atlas. Not really. This wasn’t reporting. It was obsession. The third week, he knocked on my door. Two short taps. I froze. You know that moment when you realize the monster in the story knows you’re reading about it? That.

When I opened, he was already turning away.
“Got too much,” he said. “Take some.”
He handed me a plastic bag — inside were: green beans, ginger, a small packet of dry tea, and a loaf of unsliced bread that smelled like home.
I didn’t know what to say. “Thanks,” I muttered.
He tilted his head. “You used to write about Zambezi Station. That train that never came.”
My spine went cold. “That was years ago.”
“I remember the way you described the platform. Like it was waiting for a ghost.”
Then he walked off. Not fast. Not slow. Just… gone again.

I didn’t sleep that night. I sat by the window and tried to remember how many people I’d hurt with my words. Politicians, sure. A few crooked priests. One ex-boss. But that article — “The Platform That Waits for Nothing” — that was personal. It was about my father. A conductor who died waiting for a job transfer that never came. How did Atlas know that? And then I realized — he didn’t speak like someone who had read it. He spoke like someone who had been there.

Three nights later, someone tried to break into Atlas’s room. It was around 2 am. I heard the clink of metal, soft cursing, then a shout. By the time I opened my door, the hallway was empty — except for a crowbar on the floor and the hallway bulb buzzing like it was choking. Atlas’s door was still locked. Next morning, the crowbar was gone. So was Atlas. Three days had passed. And there was no sign of him. The hallway bulb blew again. The woman in the red wrapper came, saw his door untouched, then turned away without leaving her parcel. Her face didn’t show concern. It showed resignation, maybe. Like someone who’d waited for this moment and finally accepted it.

I knocked once. Nothing. Twice. Still silence. I didn’t try a third time. Instead, I walked to the market — the one near Freedom Street — where the vendors wore ragged football jerseys and sold tomatoes on flattened Chibuku cartons. I bought bread. Ginger. Green beans. I passed them to children who stared at me like I owed them more.

I thought of Atlas’s silence. The kind of silence that leaves behind an aftertaste. On the fifth night, I broke into his room. The lock was old. A well-placed butter knife and a prayer. I didn’t expect to find much. Maybe a suitcase. A wallet. A half-used roll-on. But the room was too… intentional. Minimal, yes — but not empty. Every object had gravity. A low mattress, neatly made. No sheets, just a grey blanket folded military-style. A red basin in the corner, water still fresh. A chair. A wooden crate stacked with empty glass bottles — each one with a label peeled off. And next to them, a ledger. Leather-bound. No dust. I opened it.

Each page was lined with a date, a name, a location, and three columns marked:

Loss | Debt | Settled

The last entry, dated three nights ago, read:

Jonathan Kawewe – Ridgeway – Trust
Loss: Intuition
Debt: Silence
Settled: Incomplete
That was my name.

I died in silence. I hadn’t told anyone my full name in months. Not since the papers dropped me. Even my ex-wife called me “Jonny” like it was a joke that never grew old. There were more names. Too many. A priest from Ndola. A woman who sold curtains in Katete. A former headmaster from Chipata. All marked, categorized, and settled. One entry simply read: “Mother – Not Yet”

I closed the book and stepped back. My fingers danced in feeblest of blue. Then I saw a photo, tucked beneath a crate. It was a faded and torn black-and-white picture of a man sitting outside a diner paradise. Smiling. Holding a toddler on his knee. It was a younger Atlas with the same quiet eyes, and same air of distance. The back of the photo had a note in neat, looping script: You only inherit what you choose to carry.

I left the room untouched, and locked it. That night, I dreamed of a train station. Platform empty. No staff. Just Atlas, sitting on a bench, eating a banana and reading a newspaper upside-down. He looked up and said, “You came early.”

I started seeing him everywhere after that. In the mirror — not as a reflection, but in the space behind me. On the street — a man with his walk, his posture, but always disappearing around a corner. Even in my voice — repeating words I hadn’t written in years. It was like he had unlocked a door and walked into my narrative.

Auntie Mervis found me on the stairwell a few mornings later. I hadn’t realized I’d slept there.
“You need rest,” she said, pressing a cup of boiled groundnuts into my hand. “This place gets into people’s heads. Even Atlas used to disappear for weeks. That’s what men like him do.”
“Men like him?”
She leaned in close, “The ones who survive too many versions of themselves. Eventually, they forget which one is real.”
I didn’t answer. Just sat there, watching the hallway bulb spark and flicker like it was fighting extinction.

I hadn’t written a single word in days. No notes. No thoughts. No headlines. Just one sentence, scribbled in the corner of my notebook:

Maybe I was never tracking Atlas. Maybe I was becoming him.

The following week, a new tenant moved into 4C. Young man. Banker type. Loud phone calls on speaker, always reeking of cologne. Within days he’d plastered motivational posters on the wall outside his door — GRIND HARD in gold letters and a faded image of a lion mid-roar. He asked me once if the previous tenant had left any unpaid utilities. I told him there’d been no one in that flat for months.
He laughed and mused, “Then why does the room still smell like men’s lotion and black coffee?”
I didn’t answer. I never spoke to him again. I kept walking. Not far, not fast — just enough to feel something move beneath my feet.

I went to the train station from that old article. Platform still empty. Same cracked bench. Same peeling paint on the ticket window. I stood there for over an hour. Watching pigeons circle like clock hands, waiting for a train I knew wouldn’t come. In the corner of the bench, scratched faintly into the wood — a name: A. Akinwale Hid… And beneath it, words were scribbled: To carry something is not the same as to be crushed by it.

The next week, I returned to writing. Not articles. Not headlines. Just… words. I wrote about quiet rooms. About men who fix hallway bulbs and vanish. About women who leave banana-leaf parcels out of devotion or debt. About how silence can hum louder than city noise. I didn’t sign the pieces. Just folded them neatly and left them in odd places — the church pew behind St. Theresa’s, the bus stop near Chibolya, and the pocket of an old coat I donated to a shelter. One day, maybe someone will read them and recognize a shadow of themselves. Maybe that’s all Atlas ever did.

I haven’t seen him again. Not truly. But I dream less about trains now, and more about rooms with soft light and unspoken clemency. Sometimes I cook bread from memory. Sometimes I leave tomatoes outside my own door, just in case. And once a month, without fail, I walk to a diner near the edge of town. I sit in the corner. I order tea and wait. The waitress doesn’t know my name. She always says the same thing when she brings the bill.
“It’s been settled already.”
I never ask who paid.

 

 

 

 

 

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